Tsuki's background story....is it good?

Wow, almost sounds similar to a story I wrote, kinda scary lol. The only thing is that maybe she should go for a specific shogun, like the top boss (if you create one) and she'd be aiming for him as the important target. At least in most stories there's always a main antagonist. Pretty interesting story since again it alsmot sounds very similar to one of my stories.